Developing Lolo

These pages are generally just trying to develop my Lolo drawings into a form more suitable for comics. The first two spreads show my various notes and whatnot. Is this nice to see or just ugly and messy? Who knows?

Then two single images. The first of which I don't really like at all. It was meant to be her looking in a mirror. Does this come across at all? It was meant to be kind of like a single panel gag comic but without a gag? Anyway, I won't dwell on it any longer. The final image is pretty much the final 'style'. I'm pretty happy with it. Now I just need to get her into some actual comics...